Sunday Morning Gunshots
By John R. Greenwood
Cool not cold
One damp November morning
Early morning walk beckoned
I grabbed a coat
Hunting season
The smell of wet oak leaves permeate the air
Hunters rejoice
Deer take cover
I understand thinning of the herd
Yet, I cheer for them
To escape the harm
The bullets spray their way
The early morning silence is broken
In the hilltops while I walk
Bang, bang, bang, bang
I cringe
Bang, bang, bang
I cringe again
Why so many?
Why so many?
November deer
Helpless to escape
Run
Scatter
Hide
Dodge the bullets
That come their way
Oh what a quiet morning
Shattered by that sound
As my steps bring me closer to the wood
I tilt my head
Bang, bang, bang
How many deer could there be?
I tilt my head, trying to decipher the reason
Why so many?
Could the deer be fighting back,
Surrounding hunters and giving chase?
Bang, bang, bang, bang, bang
My early morning search
For solitude and peace
Has turned into a nightmare
As I began to turn, and go back home to quiet walls
The sound seems clearer
More sorted
More familiar
I’ve heard that sound before
A sound I’ve made myself
The sound an early morning hammer makes
An anxious man
Hammer in hand
An early morning project
Roofing nails
Hammered down
Bang, bang, bang, bang, bang
Everyone wins this cool November morning
The deer escape
The man with the hammer, his roof complete
My walk fulfilled, my heart, is light
The hunter
Sits and waits
And smells the wet oak leaves
And dreams of points to grace his wall...
J.R.G.11.15.09
I'm glad it was a hammer banging--I'm rooting for the deer!
ReplyDeletepowerful words, keep writing, keep sharing.
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