June 08, 2010

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By John R. Greenwood


Age Behind

Age Ahead

Never Full

Never Fed

Pounding Heart

Pounding Head

Life Because

Life Instead


J.R.G.6.7.1955

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10 comments:

  1. AnonymousApril 24, 2011 at 6:20 AM

    I love the rhythm and you got me thinking :)

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  2. AnonymousApril 24, 2011 at 7:41 PM

    I think it says a lot more than the obvious!

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  3. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallApril 29, 2011 at 10:28 PM

    fun word flow.
    smiles.

    Happy Weekend.

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  4. AnonymousMay 1, 2011 at 6:58 PM

    You need to have a "love button" so i can press it!

    :)

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  5. MarianMay 1, 2011 at 7:45 PM

    yes!

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  6. Sherry Blue SkyMay 1, 2011 at 9:49 PM

    Love it!!:)

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  7. Eileen T O'Neill .....May 1, 2011 at 10:30 PM

    John,
    I really love the punchy feel to this poem. Deep with lots of meaning to consider.

    Best wishes, Eileen

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  8. madhumakhiMay 2, 2011 at 8:19 AM

    Interesting scheme, just two words per line coupled with rhyme.

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  9. Brother OllieMay 2, 2011 at 8:48 AM

    nice tight poem - i dig it

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  10. AnonymousMay 3, 2011 at 8:08 PM

    http://lunawitch15.wordpress.com/clambake-week-one-results/

    award here

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