June 08, 2010

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By John R. Greenwood


Age Behind

Age Ahead

Never Full

Never Fed

Pounding Heart

Pounding Head

Life Because

Life Instead


J.R.G.6.7.1955

10 comments:

  1. I love the rhythm and you got me thinking :)

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  2. I think it says a lot more than the obvious!

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  3. fun word flow.
    smiles.

    Happy Weekend.

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  4. You need to have a "love button" so i can press it!

    :)

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  5. John,
    I really love the punchy feel to this poem. Deep with lots of meaning to consider.

    Best wishes, Eileen

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  6. Interesting scheme, just two words per line coupled with rhyme.

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  7. http://lunawitch15.wordpress.com/clambake-week-one-results/

    award here

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