June 23, 2011

Sail Away With Me


Sail Away With Me 
(To my wife)
By John R. Greenwood

A boat 
A boat 
I wish to be
So you could sail away with me

A breeze 
A breeze 
 For you and me
To fill our sail and set us free

My submission for

14 comments:

  1. I like it! Nice one!

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  2. Short , sweet & simple ! Nice one !
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  3. Awww this is so sweet =)

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  4. Nice... a simple and elegant tribute :-)

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  5. What lovely thoughts in this dreamy poem. Thanks for visiting my blog!

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  6. Lovely. Made me want to sail away too.

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  7. A beautiful sentiment

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  8. lovely dreamy ...

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  9. Direct, succinct, romantic. Lucky wife!

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  10. Great to see many new faces. Thanks and come again soon.

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  11. What a perfect and lovely expression. Great poem!

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