June 23, 2011

Sail Away With Me


Sail Away With Me 
(To my wife)
By John R. Greenwood

A boat 
A boat 
I wish to be
So you could sail away with me

A breeze 
A breeze 
 For you and me
To fill our sail and set us free

My submission for
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14 comments:

  1. AnonymousJune 23, 2011 at 8:32 PM

    lovely.
    well done.

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  2. AnonymousJune 23, 2011 at 8:35 PM

    I like it! Nice one!

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  3. Michelle WallaceJune 24, 2011 at 4:04 AM

    Short , sweet & simple ! Nice one !
    http://writer-in-transit.co.za

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  4. AnonymousJune 24, 2011 at 1:27 PM

    Awww this is so sweet =)

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  5. WyomingDivaJune 24, 2011 at 8:30 PM

    Nicely dedicated to your wife!

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  6. e.a.s. demersJune 24, 2011 at 10:32 PM

    Nice... a simple and elegant tribute :-)

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  7. BerowneJune 25, 2011 at 6:04 AM

    Well written...

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  8. Judith C EvansJune 25, 2011 at 9:38 PM

    What lovely thoughts in this dreamy poem. Thanks for visiting my blog!

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  9. AnonymousJune 26, 2011 at 9:09 AM

    Lovely. Made me want to sail away too.

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  10. AnonymousJune 26, 2011 at 9:21 AM

    A beautiful sentiment

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  11. AnonymousJune 26, 2011 at 10:57 AM

    lovely dreamy ...

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  12. UnknownJune 26, 2011 at 2:00 PM

    Direct, succinct, romantic. Lucky wife!

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  13. Raining IguanasJune 27, 2011 at 1:30 PM

    Great to see many new faces. Thanks and come again soon.

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  14. Serena ShayJuly 1, 2011 at 2:08 PM

    What a perfect and lovely expression. Great poem!

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