John, this is poignant, touching...oh so sad. It breaks my heart.
Yes, indeed. You have captured the feel of the image, in my opinion.Heart wrenching.
thought provoking,love it.
What a heart-wrenching poem. I can almost see the sadness in the posture of the girl in the picture. Very well done!Here is my week 8 story: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/18/amber-waves-of-grain/
i like how you wrote this with the photo prompt in mind. what a heartfelt poem.
interesting blog title, by the way :)
A snippet from real-life ... sad ... a spot-on interpretation of the prompt though !~MISH~http://writer-in-transit.co.za/bluebell-sss-prompt-no-8-blind/
Very sad, but very true for many young women. Well done!
powerful piece with stark realism... wonderful!
So moving, and makes me wonder how I would be if I lost 1 of my 4 boys to war.The photograph adds so much, and I think it prompts more empathy from the reader for the mom.
John, this is poignant, touching...oh so sad. It breaks my heart.
ReplyDeleteYes, indeed. You have captured the feel of the image, in my opinion.
ReplyDeleteHeart wrenching.
thought provoking,
ReplyDeletelove it.
What a heart-wrenching poem. I can almost see the sadness in the posture of the girl in the picture. Very well done!
ReplyDeleteHere is my week 8 story: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/18/amber-waves-of-grain/
i like how you wrote this with the photo prompt in mind. what a heartfelt poem.
ReplyDeleteinteresting blog title, by the way :)
ReplyDeleteA snippet from real-life ... sad ... a spot-on interpretation of the prompt though !
ReplyDelete~MISH~
http://writer-in-transit.co.za/bluebell-sss-prompt-no-8-blind/
Very sad, but very true for many young women. Well done!
ReplyDeletepowerful piece with stark realism... wonderful!
ReplyDeleteSo moving, and makes me wonder how I would be if I lost 1 of my 4 boys to war.The photograph adds so much, and I think it prompts more empathy from the reader for the mom.
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