By John R. Greenwood
I love the rhythm and you got me thinking :)
I think it says a lot more than the obvious!
fun word flow.smiles.Happy Weekend.
You need to have a "love button" so i can press it!:)
John,I really love the punchy feel to this poem. Deep with lots of meaning to consider.Best wishes, Eileen
Interesting scheme, just two words per line coupled with rhyme.
nice tight poem - i dig it